With most of these longer text-based comic pages, you are forcing 3-5 comic pages worth into a single comic page.

When that commenter said earlier the text to comic ratio was right, it was correct only for that page, not the following pages. And even than only because stretching that exact page to 2 pages would have artificially slowed down the pace of the comic for no added details to the story.

Now, you are sacrificing needed details for a mostly rushed pace.

As it is now, the chapter 0 pages should have been fully skipped as they ruin the flow of the comic while not providing the reader with context that they need. There is only 2 contexts where having the chapter 0 pages as they are would work. The first being if the comic is focusing on broad strokes of the story which it clearly isn't. And the other being that what was being told in those pages was also being told to the main character that we first would be focusing on which isn't what happened in comic.

As is, the chapter 0 pages information would have made more sense to be revealed slowly in further comic pages.

invinible said:
"With most of these longer text-based comic pages, you are forcing 3-5 comic pages worth into a single comic page.-"

"-Now, you are sacrificing needed details for a mostly rushed pace."

Yeah, you (and burnersexaccount) are 100% right about that. I'm still trying to find a good middle ground on what details should be shown in both text and visuals and what should just be left in the text, so sometimes pages like this happen...

jaylus said:
Yeah, you (and burnersexaccount) are 100% right about that. I'm still trying to find a good middle ground on what details should be shown in both text and visuals and what should just be left in the text, so sometimes pages like this happen...

I normally don't wanna reply to critical comments, mainly because I don't wanna be or be seen as someone who argues with critics, but I just want you to know I took yours seriously and it makes me wanna improve more.

again it your first comic you're still trying to figure out ways to do text to picture ratio but I really find your story really interesting because I feel like you can do a lot of ideas for pokemon chastity and don't be afraid to comment because I was wondering if I should have said that or not (a bit self conscious on commenting here) but keep up doing the great work on that comic I am loving the comic.

invinible said:
With most of these longer text-based comic pages, you are forcing 3-5 comic pages worth into a single comic page.

When that commenter said earlier the text to comic ratio was right, it was correct only for that page, not the following pages. And even than only because stretching that exact page to 2 pages would have artificially slowed down the pace of the comic for no added details to the story.

Now, you are sacrificing needed details for a mostly rushed pace.

As it is now, the chapter 0 pages should have been fully skipped as they ruin the flow of the comic while not providing the reader with context that they need. There is only 2 contexts where having the chapter 0 pages as they are would work. The first being if the comic is focusing on broad strokes of the story which it clearly isn't. And the other being that what was being told in those pages was also being told to the main character that we first would be focusing on which isn't what happened in comic.

As is, the chapter 0 pages information would have made more sense to be revealed slowly in further comic pages.

I've been kinda mentioned :)