Zummeng is getting very good at storytelling and character development.

Off course she thinks Gloria is a beautiful name. It differs from hers by just one additional letter

I like the magic hood that goes through the cords holding the disc in between her horns.

The fact that Alexander offered to guide her home and she said "don't worry, I'll be fine." gives me the impression that she will not be fine.

abirdthatpierceshell said:
The fact that Alexander offered to guide her home and she said "don't worry, I'll be fine." gives me the impression that she will not be fine.

we can only hope she's safe

abirdthatpierceshell said:
The fact that Alexander offered to guide her home and she said "don't worry, I'll be fine." gives me the impression that she will not be fine.

This doesn't seem like the kind of story to pull that shit seeing how the main focus now is alexander, to add loria to the victims list while focusing on him would make the chapter look messy if she gets killed now.

Next chapter, probably, or even after that, but not now.

Another lesson for writers, the chapter system isn't for numbering your acts, its more for sectioning off your story points, like episodes to your favorite tv show, each chapter, like an episode, is labeled, or at the very least numbered, to indicate whom or what we'll be dealing with that chapter, if not to indicate a change in tone or perspective if simply labled 1-30 ect.

Though names can be more effective/memorable if you use them, and make your story stand out more as a whole, either or is fine, but usually numbering is often an indication of burn out or tight deadlines.