anneke, remmy cormo, and wolter (pack street and etc) created by general-sketches
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  • wait my brains doing the loopy loop, who crashed at remmys place? or should I trust the tags?

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  • SmallzBallz said:
    Oh, I thought it was Wolter crashing at Remmy's place this whole time.

    Nope, it was Anneke arguing with Wolter and stormed out.
    She asks to stay with Remmy.
    The next day she doesn't have any clothes, but Wolter has gone out, and she doesn't have a key.
    Anneke gets Charlie to open the door to her apartment to get some clothes.
    Wolter comes home and finds her clothes gone, thinks she's left, gets sad.
    Day Two
    Anneke tries to write a make up letter, but still thinks it's Wolters fault, and gets upset.
    They argue through the door, both retire sad, and Remmy sees this.
    Remmy decides they should be together (either that or Anneke snores too much!), and takes her back to her apartment. Remmy sees the notepad on the fridge, Anneke says she's cold, Remmy can't find a blanket (odd, it's her apartment, she should know where they are?), so Remmy cuddles her on the couch.
    Wolter wakes up and finds them on the couch, gives them a blanket, finds the note on the fridge.
    He goes back to bed, we all have a little cry.
    The FEELS man, the feels !! 0__Q

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  • RT_Pilon said:

    Day Two
    Anneke tries to write a make up letter, but still thinks it's Wolters fault, and gets upset.

    They argue through the door, both retire sad, and Remmy sees this.

    I think your misinterpreting day 2.

    Annie is writing a makeup letter. She's frustrated because she can't figure out the right words. Thus why she keeps discarding the letters and starting over a second, then third time. Finally in frustration just throwing the pad of paper at the wall and breaking down.

    Woltor feels bad about the fight. He works up the courage to go to the door and try to make amends. Instead, all he can hear is Annie screaming and the sound of something being thrown. Woltor backs off on his attempt to make up and and sits down depressed just inside his door.

    Annie never knew Woltor was on the other side of the door, she thinks he's still in the apartment and isn't going to make the first move. Woltor never knew Annie wanted to make amends, and thought she was still angry at him and was venting her rage in Remmy's place. Both end the day thinking the other is still upset with them and unwilling to make peace.

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  • RT_Pilon said:
    Remmy decides they should be together (either that or Anneke snores too much!), and takes her back to her apartment. Remmy sees the notepad on the fridge, Anneke says she's cold, Remmy can't find a blanket (odd, it's her apartment, she should know where they are?), so Remmy cuddles her on the couch.
    Wolter wakes up and finds them on the couch, gives them a blanket, finds the note on the fridge.
    He goes back to bed, we all have a little cry.
    The FEELS man, the feels !! 0__Q

    I don't think she said she was cold...just started shivering, which Remmy sees. But he didn't know where any blankets were so he just became her blanket.

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  • Sasparillafizz said:
    I think your misinterpreting day 2.

    Annie is writing a makeup letter. She's frustrated because she can't figure out the right words. Thus why she keeps discarding the letters and starting over a second, then third time. Finally in frustration just throwing the pad of paper at the wall and breaking down.

    Woltor feels bad about the fight. He works up the courage to go to the door and try to make amends. Instead, all he can hear is Annie screaming and the sound of something being thrown. Woltor backs off on his attempt to make up and and sits down depressed just inside his door.

    Annie never knew Woltor was on the other side of the door, she thinks he's still in the apartment and isn't going to make the first move. Woltor never knew Annie wanted to make amends, and thought she was still angry at him and was venting her rage in Remmy's place. Both end the day thinking the other is still upset with them and unwilling to make peace.

    OK, I can see that...
    It's a very good layout idea, despite the odd misinterpretation.

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